Will hopefully update this week ;D School slays all things fun.
Bathsheba by Sekah
Mature | English | Romance/Humor | One-shot | 1,549 words | 4 Reviews | Complete
Summary: “The biblical story of David and Bathsheba was intended to show the repercussions of a king abusing his power. Between Yomi and Kurama, who’s the helpless Bathsheba and who’s the lecherous king? Pairing: Yomi/Kurama.”
YYHFFR Rating: 99.74/100…
Let's get crunk up in hurrr by Just 2 Dream of You
Mature | English | Humor | One-shot | 1,492 words | 4 Reviews | Complete
Summary: “One-shot: Mix one Mazakou with one Jaganshi. Add alcohol. Shake vigorously and stand back.”
YYHFFR Rating: 88/100…
Send me a YYH fanfic to review!
Reply to this post with a story you would like me to review. I’ll read anything. Hope I don’t regret saying that! XD
- I judge these spots by word count, so please pay attention to that and leave the word count on the story when you answer!
I have until Monday to get through some of these because school starts for me. 7_7 I find that if I’m undisturbed, I can read about 10k an hour or so. While I read, I also write down any mistakes I see to send to the author.
- It’s plenty okay to send me a story you wrote yourself, but note that I will only take one story per author and per replier and it cannot be one that I have already done.
- I also need the story to be published on a site that I can link people to.
Please keep all this in mind! X3
1 story 30,000 words or more.- 2 stories between 10,000 to 20,000 words.
- 5 stories under 5,000 words.
First come, first serve. Thanks for your participation!
(Thanks to scribbles5thm for the suggestion/idea!)
Anonymous asked: Do you have any advice on how to write a story that would get a 0/100?
Do you mean 100/100? I would say I’m a fair grader, honestly. If I get ones with a lower score, I would want to show them how to improve. I even send authors documents with the typos pointed out to fix them. I’m just here for help. On the off chance you weren’t being sarcastic, I believe that it’s not possible to get that score. Thanks for the ask!
To Serve Man by The Countess of Monte Cristo
Teen | English | Horror/Angst | One-shot | 1,767 words | 1 Review | Complete
Summary: “One shot. What happens when a human-eater has dinner with a half-human?”
YYHFFR Rating: 99/100…
House of Dolls by ThePurplePeacock
Teen | English | Fantasy/Hurt/Comfort | 4 Chapters | 14,317 words | 16 Reviews | In Progress
Summary: “When a young girl discovers a mysterious dollhouse, the boys soon discover their fates literally lie in the hands of a lonely child.”
YYHFFR Rating: 94/100…
After trying to apply the same critique for a few shorter stories, I realized it was inappropriate (and would generally produce low ratings no matter how good of a short it may have been). So, I plan to make a new form for shorts and one for stories in progress!
Any suggestions from anyone about how they should differ? How did you like the first review I wrote? Thanks so much for the follows and feedback!
Unexpected by Reyka Sivao
Teen | English | Angst/Romance | 5 Chapters | 24,816 words | 7 Reviews | Complete
Summary: “The first time he met her, he said he had fallen in love. He didn’t mean it… then. Shishiwakamaru/Genkai.”
YYHFFR Rating: 93/100…